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Ryuuko Matoi by pawelosro Ryuuko Matoi by pawelosro
Had a lot fun drawing this one and learned a lot.
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i-framed-vader Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like this piece! I think the only critiques I would give is working on clothing a little bit, your anatomy is good, and shading is good too :) The colours are nice to look at and blend well together with those true did choose for shading/highlights. I think he broken waterline is a bit odd, while it was on purpose I would consider possibly making it consecutive to avoid broken and distracting breaks. The lineart in most areas is straight, and connects well, but there are  a few that could use just some simple cleaning up, as well as pulling the head down a little bit. Just a few little things ^-^ this piece is really nice otherwise though, your whole gallery s really good looking over it I thought I'd just bring these points up since they seem a little bit repetitive simple things in your drawings that could help! But otherwise your art is really nice ^,^ keep working!
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pawelosro Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
Thank you for pointing out things I can improve. Will try to do them better next time. I'm glad you like my work. :)
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i-framed-vader Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem your stuff is really good though I look forward to seeing more of your stuff!
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